Fade Away

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

When it all fades away

Can't breath
Without seeing ur face
Can't go on
Without feeling ur grace
Can't live
Since u left without a trace

Oh! hope, i have lost
Dreams, that will never show
Reasons, that are no more
And u fade away

The sound of ur voice
The song, that is you
The gaze of ur beauty
The picture, that is you
The look of ur eyes
The smile that is you

Oh! hope i have lost
Dreams are no more true
Reasons are forever gone
When you fade away

And then it hurts no more
A memory far away
A feeling that's so over
My feelings, i now own
My breath, now i can take

Oh! hope i have regained
Dreams, i will hold
Reasons, i give again
After you fade away


Submitted: June 01, 2008

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xXMusicXx

woow i like =D

Wed, June 11th, 2008 4:02pm

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Thank you!
me like as well :D

Thu, June 12th, 2008 12:32am

njonasfan

wow. this is really good. i loved it. i would love if you would check out some of my work.

Tue, June 17th, 2008 9:56pm

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thank you and sure :)
doing so now

Wed, June 18th, 2008 2:35am

craaig

I can really feel this poem, having loved and lost and loved again. The loss seems the end of all -- as you so eloquently phrased it. But hope returns as memories fade.
Well written. I LIKE IT. I would have liked "your" spelled out though, but thats just me. I did get used to "ur" after a few repitiions.
craaig

Tue, August 12th, 2008 9:15pm

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I think i prefer "your", but the damn net writing and all :)
glad u liked, although poetry is not my cup of tea!

Wed, August 13th, 2008 2:15am

DiscoveredDream

GOD. That was great. Keep writing ya'll kept me interested .. . . Made me think of my Babeh

Mon, August 18th, 2008 5:55pm

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Ah great it connected
keep coming for more :)

Tue, August 19th, 2008 1:01am

xStephStephx09

wow really great ur poems are awesome! :)

Mon, August 25th, 2008 5:05pm

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and i'm not into them, should check my writings :)

Tue, August 26th, 2008 5:20am

Dark Skylight

This is sooo beautiful poem.I really liked it a lot.
:)

Sun, September 21st, 2008 2:04pm

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Glad u did :D

Mon, September 22nd, 2008 12:24am

Riobald

Wow! You never cease to amaze me! You really are quite the poet as well as a superb story teller. Made me feel and sort of re-live the pain of getting over the break up with my ex-gf. Very well done!

Wed, October 8th, 2008 7:20pm

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Man, you just smother me with ur comments, really appreciate and glad u liked em

Thu, October 9th, 2008 7:28am

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