Miscellaneous by: jerkulez
Genre: Literary Fiction
Submitted: September 13, 2008
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I'm not entirely sure why, and though I try to think of it rationally, I simply cannot stope laughing. Not because your work was bad, no work is bad, regardless of whether it is good or not. And yous is good. But they way it was presented, or perhaps, the way I saw it, was so blatantly hillarious I can hardly will my fingers to type these words. Excellent job, nonetheless. Brilliant, even. You have focused in on a deep human emotion and reasoning. Well done.
well though humor wasn't in the mix
but prob since funny is my thing, it just poured out and colored my writings funny
most important you enjoyed it
Lol nicely done..
I like it jerkulez. Its very...close to the reality where all of us have to some extent or the other replaced good with bad, alwez have a reason ready to pray, are rude to parents, no respect 4 women, do not help others...
But, we really need to listen to our conscience. It leads us to d right path. I really liked ur story a lot:)
Glad u did,
i am proud of this piece :D
Nice piece jerkrulz. But you definitely need to improve your English; you are making some very basic mistakes. Although i get the whole story and poem. It was very good; specially the horror part. Reminded me of Allan Edgar Poe :p
tnx for your input
well take care next time :D
sorry... i mistakenly said the word "poem" in my comment above. Don't think i didn't read it :p
That is really a cool story, Jerkulez. I like it a lot!!!!:-)
Great!, thank you Sarah
look for more coming from me ;)
This is really REALLY AWESOMELY GOOD AND GREAT!!! :) You're a great writer!!!
Thank you so much, warms my heart to read ya say that :D
Its a good one
I enjoyed the read quite a bit. Keep writing as I see your skills growing! Peace.....Jerry
Thank for the comments, and growing i will keep doing :D
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