The Visit!

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Thrillers  |  House: Booksie Classic
What happens when i go to.....!!

Submitted: June 01, 2008

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Submitted: June 01, 2008



My heart starts pounding louder and louder as i grow nearer and nearer of my destination,
a fateful meeting it will be, a meeting to decide how tomorrow will be, and how today will end!

I mean for me it has to be the most dreaded visit of them all, something i must do, and eventually everyone does it too.

How is it possible to go in and come out the same man or person u were before
a life changing experience that can either comfort you with a great smile or leave you with so much pain, yet you come back again, hoping that this pain will go away!

as i walk my final steps, i come upon a door, the door that i fear but never the less welcomes me
i knock and the doors opens, showing me a glimpse of what is to come...
i sit and start to talk and then to another room i go in...
heart beats faster, hair starts standing up, and the sweat glands start doing their job in this cold weather.Oh God, make this an easy visit, make this all go away, help me through it
"Sit!, my son" i hear the voice vaguely. "Yes over there, feel comfy in the chair"

Screams in my head, makes way to come out and i hardly try to suppress them, start biting my lips so i won't shout or cry out!

As i finally rest on the chair, he comes close, starts looking at me with experienced eyes
"Whats the matter?" he asks.
'Nothing in particular' i muttered

"Great! now open your mouth!"
and i obediently open.

Man i hate going to the dentist!

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