Alone in the dark world
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Poem by: Jesse4Ney
Sometimes this place feels so dark, a place of death, a place of misery, like i'm all alone in it, Alone in a dark empty room, no one near me, Just me in a dark world, and the pain of knowing, the pain of dying alone... Is the worst pain ever. Im alone in the dark
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Hey, you are really good. I love it!
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Thanx :)
thank you, but i dont really think so. i just write what i feel
I really like the way you put your emotion into words, simple words but complex connotations, well done :)
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Thank you.
I know how you feel sometimes I feel that way too.
Like the poem, I could really relate to it and feel the emotions behind it.
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Hehehe yeah. Thank you though
Think you are alone? wrote this years ago and it still returns to haunt me every now and then. Whoops on the other computer, I will send it, it is called the lost highway. sound familiar?
You writing is excellent i both prose and therapy. For it is for others we write but for ourselves to heal.
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exactly... and thank you.. yes indeed you should sent it
Decided to post what I was sending to you, check it out!
PS to view my pitiful prose with the proper formatting and pictures go to "DAKeene.blogspot.com"
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THank you and will do
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