Alone in the dark world
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Poem by: Jesse4Ney
Sometimes this place feels so dark, a place of death, a place of misery, like i'm all alone in it, Alone in a dark empty room, no one near me, Just me in a dark world, and the pain of knowing, the pain of dying alone... Is the worst pain ever. Im alone in the dark
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thank you, but i dont really think so. i just write what i feel
I really like the way you put your emotion into words, simple words but complex connotations, well done :)
I know how you feel sometimes I feel that way too.
Like the poem, I could really relate to it and feel the emotions behind it.
Think you are alone? wrote this years ago and it still returns to haunt me every now and then. Whoops on the other computer, I will send it, it is called the lost highway. sound familiar?
You writing is excellent i both prose and therapy. For it is for others we write but for ourselves to heal.
Decided to post what I was sending to you, check it out!
PS to view my pitiful prose with the proper formatting and pictures go to "DAKeene.blogspot.com"
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