.Brokenly In Love.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

It starts off in my past, then present. It's kind of talking about I am in love though broken at the same time. There is just a big distance...More like not in our relationship but like literally dude.
.:XxJessxX:.

I feel the bugs,
Crawling over my skin.
My scream,
Held back in my mouth.
What is this about?

I feel the walls around me,
I can't break through.
What happened?
Something I didn't know.
Where did my dreams go?

I looked at death in the face,
My body stuck in this ugly place.
Trapped in this hell,
I begin to pace.

My blood is frozen,
My smile broken.

Living in agony,
Going to my little world.
Leaving the world behind me.
Searching for what makes me happy.

My coffin,
From within,
Is wide open.
I have found him.

Though it seems,
He's a world away.

I lay there lifeless,
Watching the trees above sway.

I feel incomplete.
Please, I need you here beside me.
I begin to bleed.

Realize,
Feel the truth in my eyes,

My heart, in your hand,
Is where it lies.

All my dreams fly above,
As I sit here,

Brokenly in love.


Submitted: September 04, 2009

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Hinako

Jessica M Loken,

I love this poem. It's a good read! Be sure to check out my novel, EYE OF THE NINJA. I'd love you know what you think.

Keep writing.

Hinako.

Sat, September 5th, 2009 4:51am

Author
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Thank you I am glad you enjoyed it. I will be sure to get to it when I have the chance!

.:XxJessxX:.

^-^

Sat, September 5th, 2009 12:10am

Death Holy

I love the emotion you have placed in this poem. It is an amazing piece. It throws all these feelings out. Like how you have become stronger, and fallen out of a dark place into something truly special. Nice job.
Favorite line, "Please, I need you here beside me". Beautiful line that says so many different things. Keep this stuff up. It's good.

Sat, September 5th, 2009 3:24pm

Author
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Thank you!! Poetry is the only time I use to express myself fully. It is my therapy Lol..

.:XxJessxX:.

Sat, September 5th, 2009 10:34am

Graeme Montrose

Wow good stuff, i like the expressions and emotion well done

Sun, September 6th, 2009 11:34am

Author
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Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.

.:XxJessxX:.

Sun, September 6th, 2009 7:21am

SadGirl2012

loved this poem i write a lot of poems you should read some of mine when you have the chance

Mon, September 7th, 2009 12:13am

Author
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Thanks for the comment! I will be sure to get to you.

.:XxJessxX:.

Sun, September 6th, 2009 8:10pm

youfoundme

i like the expressions and emotion well done

Mon, September 7th, 2009 2:03pm

Author
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Thank you!

.:XxJessxX:.

Mon, September 7th, 2009 11:10am

tastetheblood

I really liked this it had great images

Sat, September 12th, 2009 3:17am

Author
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Thanks! I am glad you could see it!

.:XxJessxX:.

Fri, September 11th, 2009 9:59pm

Naomi Taylor

this is a very lovely poem, overflowing with emotion shared by so many in the world... the figurative language was WOW and i could understand it in details and its entirety. beautifully perfect!!! u definitely have a talent! nice work ???

Sun, September 13th, 2009 3:46pm

Author
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WOW! Thanks so much!

.:XxJessxX:.

Sun, September 13th, 2009 9:01am

Snow412

Wonderfully expressed. With what has passed in life, I can relate...The ending makes the reader hold their breath for a moment indeed. The last 8 pieces are astounding and can be seen with stark clarity and in slow motion.

Interestingly wrapped work here. Great job. :D

Mon, September 14th, 2009 5:13pm

Author
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Thanks! Sorry your past life was like this. Really? I didn't realize it made the reader hold their breath. Thanks!

.:XxJessxX:.

Mon, September 14th, 2009 7:37pm

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