oh faithful little one

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16, Oct, 08
urmm?..how to explain..

she looks around herself in the black void,his evil laughter echoing around her, she can't find where he stands then on her throat she feels his hands

harder does he squeeze, her heart starts to stutter, it's getting harder to breathe!

she starts to struggle, trying to get free.  A tear rolls down her cheek, as she trys to see who it is, a scream of agony escapes her throat

it cannot be! how can it be?

her dearest brother!

his evil grin apon his face, as she fell on the ground, in this evil place

\"why?NO! PLEASE!!!NOT HIM TOO! has everyone gone? don't let the darkness cover your soul, I BEGG OF YOU!

\"i thought you had a chance to stay sane, don't leave here in vain!\"

all this pain, i thought i could save you, but apparently not

as he started to cover her in dirt, she looked up at him; hurt

she opened her mouth, as she began to sing

\"Oh faithful little one, come back to me, don't leave your soul to this evil thing, hold on tighter to the light, lift your fist and begin to fight, oh faithful little one, its alright to be scared, but don't take it out on the ones you love, or they'll  leave you, just as you feared!! the demon might be scratching for the surface, but your stronger, your hearts fighting purpose, oh faithful little one, come back to me\"

she watched him carefully as emotions of confusion run across his face, he began to pace...

he stopped above her, stared at her as a tear ran down his face; he bagan to vanish

he reached out his hand looking for help

she grabbed ahold, hugged him tightly

and took him home

Submitted: January 11, 2009

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All about your little brother. This was a nightmare right. It's a very good one jess, I have read it before but im always more than happy to read it over again. Because I like all of your peoms.

Sun, April 5th, 2009 6:20pm


lol thank you Chris x] glad you enjoyed it.

Sun, April 5th, 2009 11:48am

Dark Skylight

Awwwww :'( so sad.So beautiful!! I liked this a lot.Its so touchy.Just beautiful. :)

Sat, June 27th, 2009 12:49pm


Thank you so much.I am glad you liked it. I thought it was beautiful and sweet too.


Sat, June 27th, 2009 7:20am

Mistress of Word Play

Nice job on this one. I wanted to read a few things while I was here and glad I did. Love it. Susan :)

Mon, November 23rd, 2009 5:20pm


Wow! Thank you a lot! I really appreciate it!!


Mon, November 23rd, 2009 4:43pm

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