Singing Heartbreak
Poem by: JessJess
You tell me you love me
but yet you can't show it.
You tell me you care
but how do I know it?
I'm slipping slowly away,
too far to reach.
I hold out my hand
for you to grab.
Nothing,
nothing is there.
I'm screaming to you
on the way down.
Singing my heartbreak
as loud as i can.
But you don't hear it.
I'm only forgotten.
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your actually a really good writer. I like it. The formatting made it a little hard to read but everyone has formatting problems. :)
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thanks (:
and i fixed it
great. really great. simple yet still emotional. Cold almost...yet still vunerable (i ramble) not over the top but way better than a little good (see) i like the rhyme and prose i give you....91/100 i wanna see the angry you
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thank you (:
and i actually have some angry stuff, i just haven't published it yet
Yeah, the simplicity seems to make it more powerful. I'm sorry you ever had to experience whatever heartbreak that was - just by reading this I can guess how awful it was. :(
You're a very good writer, though.
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thank you (:
It flows very well! I love the poem :)
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thank you :D
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