Massacre.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

I'm not really sure where this came from. I apologise if this offends anyone, it is in no way intended to offend anyone.

 

 
 
 
 
“….Ouch.”
She fell to the floor.
The blood poured from the open wound.
The world turned into the most beautiful light she had ever seen.
Everything vanished in those seconds.
She was completely numb.
Completely free.
Then the world came back.
In a rush of reds and blacks.
She was back to the world filled with pain.
Bleeding on the floor.
People screaming all around her.
Her ears ringing from the gun shots.
“…H-h-hel... Help!”
She held her hand over the wound.
She tried to breathe.
Someone came to stand beside her fallen body.
Like a dark angel sent straight from hell, he stood there.
He radiated pure hate.
He held the shot gun in his grip.
She looked away, turned her head away from the hate she saw in him.
There were fallen bodies everywhere.
The room smelled strongly of blood.
Death.
This room held death.
Everyone lay on the floor dying.
Everyone, but the fallen angel holding the gun.
She tried to breathe.
Her lungs burned.
She closed her eyes.
She let go.
 
Bang!
He fell to the floor.
Free at last from the voices.
 


Submitted: March 14, 2008

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poewhit

Some terror scene

Sat, March 15th, 2008 12:18am

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Yeah. Quite scary.

Fri, March 14th, 2008 10:06pm

MissGC

wow good i like it yeah i was imagineing this as it happen mmhmm good

Sat, March 15th, 2008 11:39am

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You weird freak. lol. Thanks.

Sat, March 15th, 2008 4:50am

XxSportsMVP25xX

um um i like it... uhm uhm uhm
well violence....
wow..
haha

Sat, March 22nd, 2008 11:17pm

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Thank you.

Sun, March 23rd, 2008 12:02am

Itsuwari

Wow, I like it! Very good imagery.

Thu, April 17th, 2008 5:45am

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Thank you.

Mon, May 19th, 2008 5:13am

solenbum

wow...wow.
really good imagrey.
Violent. wow...

Wed, October 29th, 2008 11:09pm

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Moi Ha Ha. I love Violance. Thanks for the comment!

Wed, November 5th, 2008 12:19am

tastetheblood

Its not offence .Really good imagery you have there.A good twist at the end.

Sat, March 7th, 2009 1:20am

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Thanks, I though it might offend some people, I don't think it's offended anyone yet thought, so... Damn!!!
Kidding Yay!!!

Sat, March 7th, 2009 12:16am

Snow412

This makes you shake your head and question youself--"Did i just read that?"

I like stuff that does that. :)

This was a bit stifling on imagery, but horror is like that. I also liked how you incorporated the shooter's character (what he portrayed).

Thu, May 28th, 2009 7:14am

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Ow thank you!!!

Thu, May 28th, 2009 4:19am

rosalieemo

dude omg i loved i9t have any of you and jessyka read OneLastKiss or FINALLY TOGETHER FOREVER (HARLEY)
ps:jessyka I LOVED IT !

Mon, June 1st, 2009 3:28pm

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Thanks so much.
I'm glad you liked it.
I haven't read what you suggested but I will give it a read.
Thank you for reading and commenting!!!


=D

Tue, June 2nd, 2009 12:29am

Dark Skylight

Wow,lol.AWESOME!Cool! Liked it!! :) very interesting

Sat, June 20th, 2009 6:08pm

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Thanks, glad you liked it!!!

Sat, June 20th, 2009 9:22pm

Lorelei

A dark angle sent from hell? KWEL! lol. loved it!

Sat, June 20th, 2009 11:53pm

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Thanks.
It's a little dark, but so am I.
Thanks for reading and commenting!!!


=X

Sat, June 20th, 2009 9:23pm

Roxanne Willow

the violence brings a smile to my face

..i must be heartless

i loved it

Thu, November 5th, 2009 9:43pm

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Lol, I must be to, I wrote it.
I think their is a little darkness in us all, I just generally express mine.
Anyways, now that I've scared everyone, thanks for reading and commenting!!!

Sat, November 28th, 2009 10:58am

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