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Murder With Words
The air is getting tight,
Vision slurs,
I’m losing sight,
Grip my fist,
Grasp a knife,
One more kick,
And I’m ready to fight,
That’s right,
Give me a pen and paper,
Damn right I’ll write,
I’ll run with words,
With steps so light,
And I might,
Be angry enough,
To skip a few lines,
Could still make it sound good,
With half-assed rhymes,
So why try,
To push yourself to my expectations,
To my limits,
How does it feel?
To know your words don’t mean shit,
Am I speaking too fast?
Can you comprehend?
Face to comparison?
Yes, I hate with a passion,
Never lacked understandment,
Are you sure you can handle it?
Fully commit?
Need to slowly listen?
Tie yourself back,
Feel your mind glitching,
Heart tripping,
I’ll be the blood racing,
In your vains, as your life’s pacing,
As your shaking,
I’ll just whisper hastily,
“Are you sure you can take me?”
I’m only ninety-percent crazy,
The other ten-percent made me,
Feel normalcy,
Are you falling quickly?
Catch your breath,
And breathe in slowly,
Take this in gradually,
Realize you got corrupted badly,
It’s sad,
It’s a hurtful sight to see,
To get murdered with words,
From the likes of me,
It will continue to increase,
No I will never cease,
I’ll laugh as you decease,
To know it was all properly done,
By me

Submitted: January 19, 2011

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omg. I like that. its hottt. so good.

Wed, January 19th, 2011 12:09pm


Thank you. Become a fan and please read more! :)

Wed, January 19th, 2011 4:18am

Megan Fadez

Hey, Jez.
I've read through the poem and I could really say, I enjoy your writing very much. The emotion really flows out of this one. Keep it up.

Thu, January 20th, 2011 7:59am


thanks. :) read more if you can.

Thu, January 20th, 2011 2:42am


this is pretty bad ass. ha
Love much,

Tue, January 25th, 2011 11:24pm

Gadzookziie Spice 99

this is amazing! i wish i could write like this!

Wed, January 26th, 2011 2:16am


Hey dear:) good poem nice use of imagery. i liked the lines "Yes, I hate with a passion,
Never lacked understandment."

Thu, January 27th, 2011 9:20am


loved it.

Sat, February 5th, 2011 6:20am


oooooooooohhhhhh i love your work
aaaaaahhhh u r awesome (envious)

Mon, February 14th, 2011 11:42am


that was awsome :)

Thu, February 17th, 2011 11:03am

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