The Kingfisher

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

Saint Crispin's Day

Such labours wall me.

Though her ghost may haunt me.

 

Spluttering in my murky lake,

She shrugs-paddles out anyway

knowing my waters'll quake.

 

her intentions cast?

entangled I cannot last

 

with but one desperate flail I'm hooked,

the ending may be booked.

 

she is my catch to no avail,

time's sharks never fail,

his deep blue monsters will be our end m'dear.

once more back to those dark deserts i so fear.

we are and were, always so far yet so near.


Submitted: June 25, 2013

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Peach Love

Great work, it seems a lot like a classic poem! I loved the final line, it's really inspirational to me! Amazing work! :)

Tue, June 25th, 2013 10:45am

dadio

Good, very good. Enjoyed.

Wed, June 26th, 2013 3:48pm

Insane De

You have great talent. This was a very well written poem and flowed quite nicely. Great job! Can't wait to read more. :)

Thu, June 27th, 2013 1:30am

Mr Fu

Hey this is really good

Thu, June 27th, 2013 1:47am

sweet agony xo

great. :)

Thu, June 27th, 2013 2:32am

midnightnala

Amazing :) I really love it, you got a lot of talent

Thu, June 27th, 2013 1:08pm

Olga Possokhova

Men's poetry!Lol Intriguing and very passionate!Great work!

Thu, June 27th, 2013 1:30pm

VictoriaLucas

Nice read. I can't wait to hear more!

Thu, June 27th, 2013 3:35pm

Entity

Excellent piece, from beginning to end. This was quite the enjoyable read.

Thu, June 27th, 2013 5:06pm

PurpleNikes

Very dark and moody. But I still loved the flow and rhythm to it.

Fri, June 28th, 2013 1:01am

bexsymple

I Like it x

Fri, June 28th, 2013 1:11am

lurazweisieben

I like it. The meaning is so deep. So, are you the kingfisher?

Fri, June 28th, 2013 1:29am

Mike Stevens

Reminds me of the classics; excellent!

Sat, June 29th, 2013 12:08am

moonlightwanderer

Beautiful piece of writting. well penned

Sat, June 29th, 2013 7:12pm

Agache Adrian

Beautiful poem sir.

Sun, June 30th, 2013 5:54pm

RenRose

Lovely, I enjoyed reading.

Mon, July 8th, 2013 2:29am

RenRose

Lovely, I enjoyed reading.

Mon, July 8th, 2013 2:29am

browneyedsoul511

Such a beautiful piece!!! Great work :)

Mon, July 8th, 2013 1:20pm

Graeme Montrose

Well worth the time to read, i enjoyed it, thanks for posting.

Wed, July 24th, 2013 8:13am

Showzeez

Wow great poem, really well wwritten

Wed, August 7th, 2013 6:56am

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