I believe in that girl.

Poem by: JiDonnelly

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To a girl i know who has no faith in herself.

They took away all hope

including all her dreams

she would prefer to go solo

wasnt one for teams.

Any light that she had they quickly put out

without any hesitation or doubt.

they brung her to the highest point

only to let her down

they spoke to her like a infant

and treated her like a clown.

they misunderstood her for she was clever and bright

here is hoping one day someone will put back on her light.

i wish her all the best and that her dreams come true..

just you continue solo love..

i believe in you.

Submitted: July 16, 2011

Personal Finance love faith feeling belief trust girl personal thought friend deep solo

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Frank Ramtahal

A wonderful dedication to someone you knew. This poem has a good flow of words attractively displayed in the centre style. I like the physical outlook.

Sat, July 16th, 2011 11:01pm

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thank you ever so much your compliments cant get much better than this it means the world to me!!

-JiDonnelly'

Sun, July 17th, 2011 9:44am

Amber Nicole 79

Very beautiful.

Sat, July 16th, 2011 11:19pm

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ThankYou

that means alot!!

-JiDonnelly'

Sun, July 17th, 2011 9:42am

Brian W

I wonder if the girl you wrote this about write poetry?? You have explained the feelings of someone with no faith well...It is hard to soar with the eagles when so many around you shoot you down with negative words...another great poem

Mon, July 18th, 2011 1:08am

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the girl the poem is about does not write poetry
not to my acknowledgement anyway..
again thank you for all your kind words!!

-JiDonnelly'

Sun, July 17th, 2011 6:20pm

Seer

Wow, this is such a loving message:') was great to read, and the rhymes fitted so well! :D felt like you were talking straight at me, haha, well done! if you want, your welcome to check out a few of mine too :)
This is great!

Tue, March 27th, 2012 11:00pm

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wow, thank you so much sweet(:
that is so lovely(:
really made me smile this!
I will be reading some of your work for sure(:
thank you!!

-JiDonnelly'

Wed, March 28th, 2012 11:07am