They took away all hope
including all her dreams
she would prefer to go solo
wasnt one for teams.
Any light that she had they quickly put out
without any hesitation or doubt.
they brung her to the highest point
only to let her down
they spoke to her like a infant
and treated her like a clown.
they misunderstood her for she was clever and bright
here is hoping one day someone will put back on her light.
i wish her all the best and that her dreams come true..
just you continue solo love..
i believe in you.
Submitted: July 16, 2011
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Very beautiful.
Sat, July 16th, 2011 11:19pmI wonder if the girl you wrote this about write poetry?? You have explained the feelings of someone with no faith well...It is hard to soar with the eagles when so many around you shoot you down with negative words...another great poem
Mon, July 18th, 2011 1:08amWow, this is such a loving message:') was great to read, and the rhymes fitted so well! :D felt like you were talking straight at me, haha, well done! if you want, your welcome to check out a few of mine too :)
This is great!
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A wonderful dedication to someone you knew. This poem has a good flow of words attractively displayed in the centre style. I like the physical outlook.
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thank you ever so much your compliments cant get much better than this it means the world to me!!
Sun, July 17th, 2011 9:44am-JiDonnelly'