Still Waiting..

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

To someone very precious.

i wont destroy you're happiness

i wont rain on you're parade

i wont forget all our memories

i wont forget all you said

i wont bother you again

i wont bother chasing you further

i wont even mention you're name

i wont replace you for another

i wont ask for a explanation

i wont ask for your time

i wont deny i still love you

i wont deny you were once mine

but if you're done with her and you're done with being free

i WILL be waiting for you back where you left me.


Submitted: July 16, 2011

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Frank Ramtahal

This is another poem expressing deep emotions. It show that you really love the person. One observation: "I" is always written in uppercase, not "i".

Sat, July 16th, 2011 10:58pm

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Thanks again love!


-JiDonnelly'

Sun, July 17th, 2011 9:44am

Brian W

A good poem but I am not sure about the "I won't" at the start of each line...I will show you YOUR poem in a different format to give you an idea...It does not mean my way is better then yours I am just showing you a different way to put your poem

I won’t
Destroy your happiness
Rain on your parade
Forget all you said
Bother you again

I won’t
Bother chasing you further
Even mention your name
Replace you for another
Ask for an explanation

I won’t
Ask for your time
Deny I still love you
Deny once your were still mine

But
If you are done with her
And you are done with being free
I will be waiting for you
Back where you left me

I am no way qualified to make these opinions :-)

Mon, July 18th, 2011 1:18am

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you know if this was set out right i could really go for this
i really really like this idea and once i know how to edit my poems im pretty sure i will change it(:
really thanks alot!!


-JiDonnelly'

Sun, July 17th, 2011 6:22pm

DopeyTomlinson

Awww, This Is Amazing!
One Of My Favorites x
I Love It!

x

Wed, February 22nd, 2012 12:31pm

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n'aww,touched.

-JiDonnelly'

Thu, February 23rd, 2012 5:45am

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