i believe in this relationship i had a very lucky escape!

So what makes my happiness less worth it
what makes me so bad to deserve this shit
any piece of happiness i have you will happily destroy
I wish you would move on and find someone else to annoy
anything and everything you can get your hands on
I wish you would vanish one word and you are gone
but everywhere i look you happen to be around
every scar i manage to heal you open back the wound
you are becoming old news now its getting boring
im getting sick and tired i will let go soaring
every time i feel strong you come and make me weak
im giving up now that my efforts looking bleak
you are nothing but a coward selfish lying thug
you had no intention in loving me you took me for a mug
I must have doorstep on my forehead too
any little chance you had you just blew
I feel sick to the stomache when you are there
I feeling nothing for you dont want to breathe the same air
from the pack you ran, from the nest you flew
bless the girl out there she is welcome to you.


Submitted: July 17, 2011

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I can almost relate, only that you realize that the relationship is just hopeless, and it's better if you're no longer together... instead of having false hope, like me.
However, this is a great poem, I truly do adore it.

Sun, July 17th, 2011 9:02pm


yeah i can tell you get the poem by that comment
its not really about giving up its about accepting what simply cannot be, and if you are living on false hope with someone
with respect please give up for your hearts sake!!
its not worth it im pretty sure you're aware of this already
but really never hang on to false hope it is a heartbreak waiting to happen..
thank you for all your possitive feedback,
and also taking the time to read it.


Sun, July 17th, 2011 2:10pm

Ian Dawn

The raw anger and emotion in this is just amazing I am glad its not me your writing about, but I get it I had a girl I was in love with married her and then bang it all went to puss and I literally could not be in the same room with her and to be honest I now cant recall any of our time together as I was so pissed.

Anywhoo I loved the poem.

Wed, November 9th, 2011 4:36am


Sorry to hear about that must have been hard in so many ways.
dont think I will ever get married me, seems more trouble than its worth thankyou ever so much for your feedback and support


Thu, November 10th, 2011 4:06am

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