The Vampire - The Gate of Heaven

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic
This is Drake and Ebony, although I put the Vampire not the Vampires because this is only from Drake's point of view. I don't think I needed to have added Ebony's point of view because that's included... Kind of.

Submitted: November 21, 2011

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Submitted: November 21, 2011



In the darkness they cower as my ruby eyes glow,

My shadow it strengthens, lengthens, my powers grow.

I lean in the doorway, my fangs they gleam bright,

I'm a silhouette, a hunter, in the silver moonlight.


In a flash, I'm gone, I'm no longer there,

But you can sense, as I move, the disturbance in the air.

I drag them from their barn, I listen as they scream,

The few drops of blood in the dark, cold stream.


I'm a hunter, I kill, I feed to survive,

I live on their blood, but they shall never revive.

But in my dark, cruel shadow, is preserved a light,

My sister, so fair, in the darkness of the night.


My soul it is tainted, but I do not care,

For at the wish of my sister, I won't even breathe air.

I shall grant her wish, no matter what it takes,

We are the Vampires, nothing is at stake.



Uh, OK, again, not the best. I feel very old fashioned all of a sudden. XD I'm not really sure who 'they' are. I'm a little uncertain as to whether to make them human, or sheep. I want to make it a sheep, because Drake is nowhere near that dark as in this poem, so he would probably murder a few sheep anyway. Unfortuantely, sheep do not scream, so i think we may have a slight problem...

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