MY FEAR…
Fearful days and fearful nights,
A fear of an unknown plight.
Of getting lost in the dark wood,
Of an ugly witch covered in a hood.
I can’t live because the fear of fear,
Can’t even die, unmourned death is also one of my fear.
Of getting rotten away in stinking dress,
Fear of unmourned , cruel death give me stress.
I fear slipping alone in the dark room,
For I can see a impending doom.
What if someone appear in darkness,
And curse me and no one will ever know his mess.
I fear walking down a lovely path
Someone may appear and arrange my grave with wreath.
And fear of getting lost in a crowded path get me scared
What if I got lost in the air.
I fear burning fire, I fear a cold criticism,
I fear a mice, I fear a ghost, I fear sudden voice,
I fear speeding cars, I fear unknown noise,
I fear… I fear… I fear…
I fear, fear itself
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Wow Jinisha this is a scary one. You go into detail on this and that's what makes it scary.
Of getting lost in the dark wood
Of an ugly witch covered in a hood.
OOOOOOO!!!! Good job.
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hmm....i was indeed scared...thank uu soo much for reading my poems and giving me your views i appreciate it....thank you once again
I like it sooooooo much , its scary but awsome :)
GOOD JOB ... keep it up
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is it scary??? well thanks
Lovely! I loved it. It was full of real feelings!
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hmm...thanks...
Holy cow that was good. My heart started racing towards the end.
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thanks......:)
scary! This is really good-no-your really good. You have the perfect words for each line, the words really click like a puzzle. Keeo up the great work!
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thanks...:)
Hey!!
I loved this!! its freaky but true.. the fear of fear is what keeps us from being ourselves and shining!
once that fear is overcome you feel on top of the world!!!
2nd stanza though... how about say
"I cant live because of my fear of fear"
and if you can... (these are honestly just my opinions and I am sorry if they are hurtful) decrease ur use of the word fear and maybe use other words to decrease the redundancy...that would be amazing!!
Overall, AMAZING JOB and you have certainly earned a fan!! xxx
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That wasn't a real critique LOL. Thanks anyways ^_^.
So this is the writ that gave you mushkie to you? Hmmm it was a wonder that you received a big comment from her... You're blessed haha...
This poem reminds me of a Tamil film named 'Thenali' of Kamal Hassan, in which he was afraid of everything... Nice writing...
Take care :)
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O.O Didn't got it lol. I wrote it way before i knew about boksie. :p Thanks for commenting
it was good, i like your wording
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thanks for the comment
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