Poem: Within This Circle

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Christian Writers

A Christian poem of faith.

Within this circle of 
the human condition, 
selfish babies will cry 
and most people will die… 
hoping to see God’s Love.

Within this circle of
this Life’s circumstances,
it seems no one can trust
as souls are going bust,
hoping to see God’s Love.

Within this circle of
clueless Church families,
the Unsaved remain queued
up for Hell and still brood,
hoping to see God’s Love.

Being focused on ourselves, 
we’ll never reach paradise; 
we require each other, 
as strong sisters and brothers, 
with a true Faith that’s precise. 

Submitted: December 18, 2015

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unmasked delusions

Cool poem. This world is definitely full of chaos. We have to remember we are not of this world, we are the light inside it. Plus we are stronger together. Reminds me of Luke 15:7 (the parable of the lost sheep) "I tell you that in the same way, there will be more joy in heaven over one sinner who repents than over ninety-nine righteous persons who need no repentance."

Wed, December 23rd, 2015 10:11pm


Thanks for your feedback and comments; much appreciated! Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays to you and yours! -Joe

Wed, December 23rd, 2015 9:04pm

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