Death whispered to me, Telling me I deserve it.
Was it just a dream? I now was groggy. I then
remembered the pills. Death sat beside me and
held my hand. "you're ready to come with me."
It was not a dream. Death took me to Hell.
Not much diferent from living. I feel like
home here.
Submitted: October 27, 2018
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Stick to real life, jmm, even with all the crazy crap happening in the world, living beats the alternative!
Sat, October 27th, 2018 6:26pm
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Thanks Mike! As crazy as the world is I plan on staying in it. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Sat, October 27th, 2018 12:43pm
Can't deny that the temptation is never there, but there's always some reason to carry on -- I hope! A lot of sadness and despair in this, jmm.
Sat, October 27th, 2018 7:27pm
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Thanks Hull. No, I wouldn't do anything that's forever. Just type of day when I wrote it. Thanks again for reading and commenting
Sat, October 27th, 2018 12:41pm
What a heavy piece, jmm
Wed, October 31st, 2018 11:45pm
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Darker than usual. Sincere thanks for taking your time reading and commenting on it.
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Rehmat Tanzila
Such a beautiful poem with an amazing title! So harrowing too :(
Sat, October 27th, 2018 3:55pmAuthor
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Thank you so much. It means a lot to me you reading and commenting.
Sat, October 27th, 2018 9:00am