Death Whispered to Me

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic


 

Death whispered to me, Telling me I deserve it.

 

Was it just a dream? I now was groggy. I then

 

remembered the pills. Death sat beside me and 

 

held my hand. "you're ready to come with me."

 

It was not a dream. Death took me to Hell.

 

Not much diferent from living. I feel like

 

home here.

 


Submitted: October 27, 2018

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Rehmat Tanzila

Such a beautiful poem with an amazing title! So harrowing too :(

Sat, October 27th, 2018 3:55pm

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Thank you so much. It means a lot to me you reading and commenting.

Sat, October 27th, 2018 9:00am

Mike S.

Stick to real life, jmm, even with all the crazy crap happening in the world, living beats the alternative!

Sat, October 27th, 2018 6:26pm

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Thanks Mike! As crazy as the world is I plan on staying in it. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Sat, October 27th, 2018 12:43pm

hullabaloo22

Can't deny that the temptation is never there, but there's always some reason to carry on -- I hope! A lot of sadness and despair in this, jmm.

Sat, October 27th, 2018 7:27pm

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Thanks Hull. No, I wouldn't do anything that's forever. Just type of day when I wrote it. Thanks again for reading and commenting

Sat, October 27th, 2018 12:41pm

jaylisbeth

What a heavy piece, jmm

Wed, October 31st, 2018 11:45pm

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Darker than usual. Sincere thanks for taking your time reading and commenting on it.

Wed, October 31st, 2018 5:44pm

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