I sat there in despair...

Poem by: Jo94

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Another young love goes bad, but not the way you think. Death is the reason. A poem of first loss. That first initial pain you feel when someone you love, your soul mate, is gone.

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Submitted: July 20, 2009

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Submitted: July 20, 2009

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I sat there in despair

They put her in the ground

Did anyone care?

Did they know she drowned?

All the life sucked out of her...

My love, no longer breathes

All that we were

Was gone out at sea

Why couldn't I be there?

That day that she swam

It wasn't even fair

It tore apart everything that I am

My girlfriend, my love, my world

was gone so quick

I bent over slightly, and hurled

I could hear every tic

Every lie, every word

Was overwhelming

I closed my eyes as everything blurred

I fell over on here grave as I heard her sing...


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I sat there in despair...

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Another young love goes bad, but not the way you think. Death is the reason. A poem of first loss. That first initial pain you feel when someone you love, your soul mate, is gone.

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