what have u done to me

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic

what you have done

what you have done

what have you done to me?
a fog of betrayal as emotions darken.
once we were together in paradise,
hand in hand and innocent,
but your love vanished.
a hateful cloud of pain -
tears follow hate, follow love,
love torn apart.
in a rush of bitterness,


Submitted: August 28, 2012

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Lowkey

Yeah it has the feeling of being unfinished but maybe that is the way you intended it to be. Very good though.

Tue, August 28th, 2012 1:19pm

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Thankyou :)

Tue, August 28th, 2012 8:05am

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