IT WAS ALL ENVY FOR YOUR BEAUTY
Poem by: Joel Twister
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It was all envy for your beauty,
cause your heart was the greatest heaven.
You were addicted to delight.
It was all envy for your beauty,
cause God, made you beautiful
and beautiful , always u were.
So shadows of envy,pain and jealousy,
decided to sorround you ,
cause u were made to never end.
You were made to last beyond infinity,
deeply as eternity.
But wicked, was their will to end you.
Entire of them, tried to bring you down to your knees, break the everlasting legacy you had.
'Cause....oh beautiful creature, beautiful human creature, who was beautiful than you?
The answer, was "wordless".
It felt like not breathing ,even if air was there, cause what can mean to you air ?
when love, faith and hope isn't there ?
Yes ..dear, the world was envy for your beauty,
cause your heart was the greatest paradise.
You were born to delight, addicted to light.
But u see, even do, we crave, what's called "everything " even do we look for happiness, or call it "bliss of joy", we get shoot ,to the ground, by unknowed strenghts, called "pain, demons of life ".
That's when we fall, yes ....for the first time, we fall ...and not only when our parents held our hands, trying to teach us to walk,not only when we were innocent children, then we fell , an innocent and childish fall, but then, that was only, to learn how to walk.
But now, here im talking about you, you fell ...and not just physically, but mentally and spiritually.
Yes, their envy was so strong, and u couldn't stand it alone.
So they dragged you down to earth,but down and beyond earth, u fall in your same pain.
Beautiful creature, i saw you dying, breathing less, crying desperately, cursing and calling out for help.
Tired of how the chains was holding u down...tired...yes, tired of suffering.
It was all envy, for your unspeakable love,
all envy for the strenght you had in your heart.
For that strenght, which wise and old men, kept searching from years gone by, oh beautiful human, they were all amazed by you, i was addicted to your light and you to delight.
Even if they tried, even if all the world killed you,
you couldn't die, you survived beauty...you survived heavenly wonder.
Because God made you beautiful and beautiful you had always been and nothing could crush you forever, nothing could end you ....
Beautiful human being, human nature.
It was all envy for your beauty,
'cause your heart was the greatest heaven,
wonders revolved and was built around you
I was addicted to your light and you to delight.
.....it was all envy towards you ....
Cause God made you beautiful, and beautiful
So u are ...
Submitted: June 15, 2014
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What happened to the other comment from Dennis? :(
Mon, June 16th, 2014 3:38amHeavenly beautiful dear. Just loved what you wrote here about our lovely Criss. I truly hope more people will read your poem and will be inspired to read Criss autobiography. You have a wonderful heart God bless you :D
Tue, June 17th, 2014 2:15pmI will be very honest with you... This poem is beautiful, but it is no way near being perfect. I need some polishing
Mon, July 7th, 2014 5:14amNone of us are perfect we just are! and this poetic musing about the beautiful Criss is just that a beautiful outpouring of love. Now me on the other hand I like my stuff dark if you get the urge come on over.
Love Criss xxx.
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Crissole
Oh wow. I am honored. You are such a sweetheart for taking the time to write and dedicate such a beautiful poem to me. And you are a beautiful young lady. Both inside and out. Thank you dear. I can't stop smiling. I am really touched.
Sun, June 15th, 2014 5:52pmAuthor
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just for you
Sun, June 15th, 2014 12:55pm