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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic
um first romance poem
and well i need tips did i do good?
my friends say this belongs on a hallmark card lol tell me what you think

and its not really done i fell in love and i wrote this and she crushed my heart,and i haven't been able to finish it

Submitted: July 15, 2008

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Submitted: July 15, 2008



The wind flowing through your hair, your aroma gently caressing my senses make me blush knowing that this smell is the smell of love. and the moments that we spend together is like a universe of emotions filling my heart and when the time comes for us to part all that keep me sane is me softly caressing your arm as I walk away as my hart skips a beat. I dont know how to express myself in this type of state.

-John Lloyd

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