The Puppy Love

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Children Stories  |  House: Booksie Classic

The story of a boy who found his first love

There're people in my school like pretty girls, the girls who wear high heels and strut with tee-tottering sound, the girls who perm hairs curly and stick fake eyelashes to attract the boys.I don't like girls like that actually, I don't know why? May be the tee-tottering sound was like my teacher stepping in the time when she scolded me for not finishing the homework. I cried for the whole afternoon that day. May be the smell of make-ups were too strong and took after the smell of bleaches. But anyway, because I never talked about girls in school, they excluded me and I have to sit alone at the back.Till that day, I saw her, saw the girl with hairs straight and all went down like a cascade, and she wears the ordinary school shoes that won't make tee-tottering sound. She's so beautiful that she was like the Snow White with Cinderella's crystal shoes.The other kids said if you like the girl, just went toward her and said 'I love you'. Then she would be your friend and never leave you. So I bought a box of chocolate of my favorite brand with the money I earned by helping mom washing the dishes. I wrapped it up with satin.I rehearsed the words in front of the mirror over and over till I can fluently recite them. \"Just say it out and give her the chocolate. Just say it out and give her the chocolate. Just say it out and......\" On the Sunday, I packed my chocolate and held it with my left hand. When I finally saw her in front of the school gate after class. I walked toward her, face and face.\"Uh... Hello.\" \"Hello.\" \"Wait a minute, please!\" \"Yes?\" \"...You forgot your pen.\" I mumbled and face flushed. The left hand was still holding the chocolate.


Submitted: December 14, 2011

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SmileValentine

wow..puppy love..
well, it's a funny little thing that everybody experienced like what the boy in the story experienced..
well done!

Fri, January 6th, 2012 1:32am

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Actually I have too : )

Thu, January 5th, 2012 7:08pm

xXCapriSunXx

Awwww This is so cute and sweet ^-^

Sat, January 7th, 2012 7:28am

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Thank you ^_^

Sat, January 7th, 2012 3:02am

thePageTurner

i think anyone who'd read this might be blushing (like me)??haha :)) wonderful short story!:)

Wed, January 18th, 2012 7:33am

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Thank you! : )

Wed, January 18th, 2012 1:17am

avery01

I wish more girls could be like that. I have my favorite pair of heels, but probably wear my sneakers even more often. This is really short and sweet. The title fits it perfectly.

Keep up the radical work!

-peace and pancakes, Avery

Fri, January 20th, 2012 2:37am

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Thank you. That thought just came into my mind like a shooting star. So I jotted them down

Thu, January 19th, 2012 8:22pm

LayoutMaker

Aww that's so cute! Is this real?
(You should probably do paragraphs. It makes the story look a little longer and it's easier on the eyes ;p )
Haha at my school, we have to wear school uniform (includes black leather school shoes) BUT a lot of girls still wear make up.

Wed, February 22nd, 2012 12:45pm

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Wow, that's amazing. Don't they think that they look much older on this way than they really were?

Wed, February 22nd, 2012 9:01pm

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