Can I Be The Wind?

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Some of us would like to be something. I'm asking , ''Can I be the wind?'' A short poem.

Can I be the wind?

And blow across your face?

Can I be the wind?

Blowing at a slow pace.


Can I be the rain?

With my drops splashing around?

I'll be quite sane,

And not make an awful sound.

Submitted: June 23, 2018

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Melancholic Wisdom

Lovely short poem, I really enjoy how used nature in this way. The imagery is extremely vivd, well done!

Sun, June 24th, 2018 3:57am


Thank you!

Sun, June 24th, 2018 2:09am


Very beautiful, John... so romantic

Mon, June 25th, 2018 9:43pm


Thank you!

Tue, June 26th, 2018 3:25am

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