Jonah Okpabi

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Literary Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic


Jonah Okpabi writes from Port Harcourt, Nigeria.


Submitted: November 29, 2014

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ktsharma

A nice story.....


HAVE A LOOK ON MY STORY:: A T!me to love !

THANK YOU!

Sat, November 29th, 2014 10:49am

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thanks very much for taking a look at my story. im quitely reading your work. its fun

Thu, December 4th, 2014 7:49am

Jonahbrown

Thanks very much for finding time through my work. I'll visit your page immediately

Sat, November 29th, 2014 11:41am

niyatiapa

Brilliant imagination. Tenses n grammar was a bit off here n there but the stark innocence n magnificience of the dream contrasting with the ugly reality of life is a nice touch n very realistic too, cos that z what most of our dreams are... an escape from painful realities.

Sat, November 29th, 2014 8:39pm

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thanks very much for finding time through this piece.. Shakespearean English was used in communication in order to differentiate the world of fantasy (dream) from reality. your points has been noted. thanks once more

Thu, December 4th, 2014 7:53am

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