Dont forget.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic

When forgetting to close her garage door a man sneeks into her house, leaving notes in the house thinking its her husband. When she finds out it wasent her husband she wonders who might be in her house.

" Dont Forget "

A short film dedicated to Trista Anaya.
Coming from work, opening the door, turning the door knob pushing it open. Taking her coat off, about to put it on the hanger on the door when she sees theres a note on the door saying " head to the kitchen xoxo " 
She takes the note off smiling, throwing her coat on the desk right next to her. While walking over to the kitchen she sees another note saying " right this way honey " 
As she finally gets into the kitchen theres another note on the table saying " congradulations love! Head over to the bedroom "  
while she walks to her room she hears a door shut in her room.
When she gets inside her room she says " honey you there? "
She walks over to her bed and she sees another note that says " I have a special surprise for you in the closet xoxox "  
She kisses the note and sets it down and when shes about to walk over to the closet her phone goes off. She takes her phone out of her pocket, and its her husband and answers the phone and says baby, in a very exciting voice, 7 seconds later and he finally replys and says " sorry honey I wont be back until tomorrow evening " 
she replys back saying " honey you didnt come home today? " 
he responds back saying " No why? "
she replys back saying " nothing " 
He says " Did you forget to close the garage door? " 
she then says " No I thought you did? " she sets the phone done and walks over to the closet slowly while her hands are shaking, whens she about to turn it, it opens slowly and someone pulls her in and the door slams shut, hard. 
The sound of her screaming on the other end of the phone. 
Her husband hangs up and recieves a text saying " Job Finished. " he shuts his phone off and puts it into his pocket.

Submitted: November 18, 2014

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