The Hounds of Hell

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Religion and Spirituality  |  House: Booksie Classic

I have seen the hounds of Hell. A weak little poem I wrote whenm I was in an RTC.

I have seen the hounds of hell.

Their's is a gift to make you tell.

Yours lies, mistakes, defects, and sins.

A pain I wish not to feel again.

I have seen the shadow's wraiths,

that keep you from the golden gates.

They eat your hate, and drink up fear.

To hide from Him has kept them near.

I've met with hatred imps and trolls.

with weapons meant to pierce the soul.

I've been subjected to white crows,

Who hang you from fires by your throat.

You too can lose so very much.

Your heart, your soul, and all of such.

You can be kept behind the gates of hell.

But should you?  Will you?  Time will tell.


Submitted: January 23, 2010

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Jackopolis Reloaded

Interesting. Perfect, one might say. I hope to see more of your poems in the future.

Wed, January 27th, 2010 7:02pm

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You really think it's perfect?
I'm very thankful^^

Wed, January 27th, 2010 2:28pm

PaulChafer

Interesting, perfect? Hmm, a matter of perception . . .in my opinion;o) I enjoyed the read, not sure what it means exactly, but just from this i can sense your high intellect and know you can write. Shall return over the weekend for your novel and a reread of this.
Paul.

Fri, January 29th, 2010 11:26pm

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Exactly what I wanted to hear on three notes. Not too fascinated, but coming back for more. I will update my novel now just for you, my friend^^

Fri, January 29th, 2010 4:43pm

Pirate Bug

Wow this is really good. I really like it. It kind of reminds me of lyrics that I have written. Really good....MPb

Wed, February 10th, 2010 7:53pm

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Why thank you.

Wed, February 10th, 2010 2:27pm

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