Into the ocean

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A lost love.

I carve our names into the sand,

wondering what it would be like to hold your hand.

Imagining your lips touching mine,

but suddenly I begin to cry.

The water crashes over me,

and I drift away in the deep blue sea.

Come and help me, pull me out,

can't you here my screaming shouts?

I'm drowning in the thoughts of you,

and there's absolutely nothing that I can do.

Submitted: June 04, 2008

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Hey, I like this poem. Great imagery :) It said so much in just a few lines. Brilliant!

Wed, June 4th, 2008 4:16am


Yeah I commented myself, like I said, Im new to this site.
Thank you!
and thanks for being a fan!

Wed, June 4th, 2008 8:43pm


Thank you =)
This was one of the fisrt poems I wrote that involved more imagrey, I'm still working on it though.

Wed, June 4th, 2008 5:38pm

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