All Hah Dream

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is a s0ng I wr0te this evening...I h0pe yall do find it interesting though - Josephicated

[verse 1] I dont seem to understand things I see these days/ some dude wont take corrections even after six big mistakes/ We exhale love but still we breath in hate/ In angst and regret you seat and bake/ with an innocent face you give us and we happily eat that cake/ not knowing its source so now we all lost in lust/ Im at a buffer supper but still starving/ your plan to sprinkle me with da Holy water will fail, fill a p00l with it and I will easily dive in/ Im already at da edge, Lord dont lemme fall, guide me/ Im not ready to be left alone, not at all, stay beside me/ Im I having a bad dream or a nice nightmare?/ 'coz it seems da harder that I scream, da more I get iced by fear/ I only see evil mehn, Im fed up/ but I can no longer cry seems like I aint gat no tear dots/ Today they be a friend of me, and an enemy tomorrow/ Is there such thing as a friend til da end?/ That one that makes you feel high even when yur so low to da extent that yur nat alone but you feel yur solo/ The one who shares your hapiness and dispels your sorrow/ The one who clears your despair and cheers your soul yo!/ Also da one who hangs on through your tantrums/ no matter how annoying and how long/ That one who be silent and still you understand em/ Guess that's the kinda peer you can call a friend/ Will someone catch me? As I fall I scream, but is this really ALL HAH DREAM?..............................Jesus can be that special friend.


Submitted: December 12, 2014

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PoeticMe♥

I like the message and flow of this :). It's interesting how it switches from rhyme to free verse. Good Poem. ~Poetic

Tue, December 30th, 2014 9:59am

Josephic

Thanks...Im glad yho liked it

Wed, December 31st, 2014 10:24am

Yulia

That was awesome!...and great :)
Keep on writing those fabulous songs!
-Yulia

Tue, March 17th, 2015 7:18pm

Josephic

Thanks a lot yulia... Thanks for reading and commenting on this, and yur awesome! ^_^

Tue, March 17th, 2015 9:25pm

SuzonneH

I like this... but Jesus? XD No.

Sat, March 28th, 2015 9:41pm

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Thanks a lot for reading and commenting
this suzzy.

Thu, May 7th, 2015 5:02pm

Criss Sole

I thought this was a very powerful poem. I especially like the line "We exhale love but still we breathe in hate." Great use of metaphors. Excellent writing!

Fri, December 21st, 2018 11:03am

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Thanks a lot Criss, I'm really honoured that you took out of your time to read this, thanks a lot.

Fri, December 21st, 2018 12:39pm

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