COAST IS CLEAR (CIC) V2

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Yo! This is da second verse of ma song COAST IS CLEAR (CIC). I want yall commenting this please.

It wont BE LONG 'fore my already WEAK LOVE drowns in this OCEAN OF HATE/ I can only start a problem but cant SOLVE IT hope I never run-out of the LOTION OF GRACE/ My RAGE IS IN MOTION 'coz my EMOTION'S BEEN CAGED/ 'fore I use to CREATE C0MOTIONS when I act nice,hope that EQUATION'S BEEN CHANGED/ I cant hear my conscience speak no more,it's been buried inda DEPTHS OF MA REGRET/ I've paid all my debts but couldnt pay attention,that's the only DEBT THAT IS LEFT/ When I stare at the mirror, I LASH 0UT/ be fighting myself until I PASS 0UT/ Im lost in a world that IS STRANGE TO ME/ what they call love MEANS HATE TO ME/ so I dont see why I should choose to be FRIENDS WITH EM/ 'coz when Im close to em all I SENSE IS HELL/ Opportunity wont knock on my door,so I knocked on its,but when it opened all I could see was my FOES IN THERE/ please dont leave me here,keep reading this and I will be safe until da COAST IS CLEAR.


Submitted: December 14, 2014

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childish memories and incredible things

I loved the rhyming you did in this! "...my emotion's been caged..." is probably my favorite line. You're a great rapper/poet/writer. And ps-it is A LOT more easier to read now since you changed how you typed it. Wonderful!:)

Sun, December 21st, 2014 4:44am

Josephic

Thank yho for the compliments,glad you liked it.

Sun, December 21st, 2014 1:25pm

Windextor

As a rap/song writer myself, I can see that you have good rhymes in your verses but reading rhymes is nothing compared to actually hearing you flow this verse over a beat. If you have a link to your music then i'd be happy to hear it.

Mon, December 22nd, 2014 10:18am

Josephic

Sorry...I dont have the audio version of that yet,but might soon.

Mon, December 22nd, 2014 3:54pm

drcommonsense

This was a great message. It's one of those poems you have to read 2 or 3 times to really appreciate how deep it is. GREAT JOB!!!!

Sat, June 4th, 2016 7:43am

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Thanks a lot man ^_^ really, really... Thanks a lot....

Sat, June 18th, 2016 2:43am

Criss Sole

I thought this was very deep. I felt despair. I could relate to so much of this. I would love to hear you perform this.

Sat, January 11th, 2020 7:56am

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Thanks a lot for reading Criss Sole, I'm really glad you could relate. About the track I've got a couple of other things cooking currently after their completion I will be sure to come back to this. Thanks for reading once more!

Sat, January 11th, 2020 8:06am

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