Pfffshhht :3

Your actions,

They dont hurt me.

But your words,

They tear my soul apart.

I thought you were nice

But your just pure evil.


Just because I'm different to you

Doesn't mean you should hate me.

What have I done to deserve this?

I'm still waiting for the answer.

I know I'm not perfect,

But who is in this stupid world?


Submitted: August 19, 2012

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That is good. You should write more.

Sun, August 19th, 2012 6:26pm


Good lord. This is one of those poems that makes me just ask "Why."

First of all, come up with an actual title you lazy git. "Aaah idk D;" Is not a title, it's a tweet. Come on.

Secondly, do a bit of grammar check, would you? Dont= don't, your=you're.

Finally, poetry is a way to express your thoughts and feelings creatively, and with perfect clarity using descriptive words that read with a rhythm. You've got the "thoughts are pretty clear" part, but you lack any description whatsoever.

"Pure evil"? Please, dig a little bit deeper. No one is "pure evil". This poem states thoughts and feelings so simply that it can hardly be considered a poem at all.

-Half Blood Princes

Sun, August 19th, 2012 8:56pm

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