Your actions,
They dont hurt me.
But your words,
They tear my soul apart.
I thought you were nice
But your just pure evil.
Just because I'm different to you
Doesn't mean you should hate me.
What have I done to deserve this?
I'm still waiting for the answer.
I know I'm not perfect,
But who is in this stupid world?
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Comments
That is good. You should write more.
Good lord. This is one of those poems that makes me just ask "Why."
First of all, come up with an actual title you lazy git. "Aaah idk D;" Is not a title, it's a tweet. Come on.
Secondly, do a bit of grammar check, would you? Dont= don't, your=you're.
Finally, poetry is a way to express your thoughts and feelings creatively, and with perfect clarity using descriptive words that read with a rhythm. You've got the "thoughts are pretty clear" part, but you lack any description whatsoever.
"Pure evil"? Please, dig a little bit deeper. No one is "pure evil". This poem states thoughts and feelings so simply that it can hardly be considered a poem at all.
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