Kiss Me In The Rain

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Um, this is quite embarrassing. I mentioned earlioer that I did not want to provide any information about my personal life, however I feel I must get an opinion of this. I have written my girlfriend (the most important person in my life right now) a song... but I am not entriely certain if she will enjoy it. Please, feel free to give your opinion or any constructive critisism. And wish me luck. Also, keep in mind that parts of this may seem silly (like my mention of the show House), but they are topics that are relevant to jokes of ours and/or our relationship. I look forward to your opinions. Wish me luck.

Submitted: April 04, 2009

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Submitted: April 04, 2009

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Kiss Me In The Rain

(Rough Draft)

Now Monday's 'bout the time I wanna skip the whole day
My souls over here but my hearts far away.
And Tuesday's the day where my minds out of place
'Cause House can't compare to the sight of your face
Wednesday's the day that I can't help but fear
Too many days apart and two days 'til we're near
Well Thursday and Friday, they're both boring and lame
'Cause come Saturday...

We'll watch Eagle Eye
And we'll walk through the ghetto
Just to know you're alive
Makes me one happy fellow
Now I know life ain't fair
But all just the same
I won't give up 'til I ...
Kiss you in the rain.

Kiss you in the rain___.

People always ask me this question
"Do you think there's angels out there"
I tell them "Hey, look at this girl" and they say
Well that's an angel right there
They all stare in awe of you and give God their praise
For truly an angel would have such a face
They look back at me and they ask what's in Heaven
I laugh and I tell them it's when...

When I look in her eyes
And when I kiss her hand
She lifts me up high
And she makes me a man
If love is a battle
Well then call me a green barret
'Cause I won't give up 'til I ...
Kiss her in the rain.

Kiss her in the rain____.
(music escalates)

Now look how the people are shouting
"Here's God's gift from above!"
She's got beauty, she's got the grace, and the character
Now all she needs is... love.
(music tones down)

I told them leave me his angel
I'll take care of her
Give her all she's ever wanted
Keep her safe and warm

Now my hearts always with her
And I can't stand the weekdays
But hell yeah it's worth it!
'Cause come Saturday...

We'll watch Eagle Eye
And we'll walk through the ghetto ("kiss her in the rain" begins to repeat every other line)
Just to know you're alive
Makes me one happy fellow
Hey I know life ain't fair
But all just the same
I won't give up 'til I
Kiss her in the rain (continues into next line)

When I look in her eyes
And when I kiss her hand
She lifts me up high
And she makes me a man
If they say love is a battle
Then call me a green barret

'Cause I wont give up 'til I ...
No I can't give up 'til I ...
No I won't give up 'til I!

Kiss her in the rain.
Kiss her in the rain_____.
Kiss her in the rain.
Kiss her in the rain______.
Please just kiss me in the rain.

Oh Darn.
Oh Yes.
Oh No.
Are you ready for the weekend___?


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