The Fable of BayBell Lore

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic
Fictional Classic Of a story never told to public with a twist.

Submitted: December 13, 2014

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Submitted: December 13, 2014

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Once apon  a time when time didn't exsist. The garden of Eden recieted in the heavens. A great knight took intrested in the fobbiden black ruby Fruit called the apple of power. He's name was Micheal. Ptah Yakwa right hand Gaurd. Back then none would attempt to eat the fruit of this evil seed. His lust to be free of devotion and the center of power. Made him a dependant being. One night he snuck into the garden and ate the apple. devoreing it all. The next day he created the black flute that looked gold and play a unusaul tune. Some found it so beautiful other found it to hurt there ears. It drew attenchion to Ptah and he sought addience With Micheal. Ptah destroyed his flute after seeing the behavior of Micheal thinking it was the flute that changed his mind set. An tossed him out of the guards guild. Anger he sought to revenge his displacement. The followers of his music heard his words like a heaven sent. Others found him a threat to life and war began arms. in posters then riots on the streets of Glodar. It was of choice to decied what side to fight and war was but hours away. The women being shedded blood tears as they saw there lovers walking out the door. One women Bayball Lore. The Garden of Eden reseach anyilest found her self in the same position. What must i do to save my love. She knew he was choosing the wrong side to make sure the love would stand strong in trial. If evil won he would be able to take his love. if good one she would be able to bring leance to his punishement. All she could think about was the blood of her people being shedded. She decied to eat from the wishing tree the tree of miracles since that was the only tree that would change fate however, if you ate from the tree you would die. So she had to be word choicey over her contract with this Great Fruit the garapefruit. She made concil with a few other women to explain her actions to ptah. when he finds out.She left many messages.The first persons message was to Ptah. the 2nd was to explain  her choices on the battle field. Blood was shedding like rain in the war as she made haste to the 3rd person the message to her husband. The message was to  reasure him her soul will not die. BayBell Lore bite into the grapefruit and made this wish in her mind word for word.  "None shall parish, and ptah or the father of good and jugdest will tyupmth over evil in any war and when all the battles are won for good he may destroy his enimes." With that she fell to the ground and died and the earth cracked and the tree died the fruit rot fast and fell to the ground. all was laid in the hands of ptah yakwa. War was over time split into  a play to be seen only by ptah.Only ptah saw the blood being shed of so many of his people and the emotions of war within the heavens. when time replayed itself those dead where alive and evil was being captured on all sides to be trailed before the thrown. All true evil was cursed and fell from there world. Never to live in such paradise again. Except Z. The story of Z. is a twisted ending the anubis the statue to be awaken in a time of her presants ... his love and his gold. Fin


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