Love story gone wrong

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic
Yeah I'm not good at poetry but I wanted to work on writing lyrics because I'm in a band. So I started to write about one of my ex's that I wasn't fond about and I was wondering if anybody has advice or anything to write better poetry I'd be more then happy to listen to what you have to say

Submitted: April 12, 2011

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A bottle of pills to numb the guilt

Smoking weed and owning every sexual disease

You only left me with the dignity of not sleeping with you

Your beauty clouded my Christian judgment

A layer of makeup to hide whats inside

I saw the sin in your eyes

You preyed on my desire inside

I ask again and again

Why did I love you why was I with you

Your friends called you the street whore

Why didn’t I find out when it was to late?

When I left you said that you bled a heart and needed it to stop

My heart died long ago I thought you noticed

Your sleazy state took me awhile to recuperate

And I ask again and again

Why did I love you why was I with you

I’m destined to be alone

I can’t trust your kind again

My shame has taken me to the end

Never to love again

This history has haunted me to detain

Now my emotions are contained to never be harmed.


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