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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

When your heart is broken, the bartender became
your best friend.

Bartender, please, a double scotch, no wait

Make it, triple

Have to let them go, sweetest, niples

Broken heart, pieces of me,

Where, could I be? Of course, crying

My heart out,

Amigo, bring me, venom snake, one more shot

Double please,

Cause I got,

This pain, in my heart, is rain

One more whiskey, mixed with beer

She's no longer, my dear...Damn it!


Here's to your health, I'll hold my breath,

Till' I'm drown,

In my own, downpour.

By: Juli Monat

Copyright (c) 2013

Submitted: September 03, 2013

© Copyright 2021 Juli Monat. All rights reserved.

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Elizebeth Medley

I like what you did with the conversation, very original

Tue, September 3rd, 2013 3:42pm


Elizebeth, I'm glad you noticed that.
I put myself into a bar and started to talk
to myself.

Wed, September 4th, 2013 6:40am


Love it!!!:)

Wed, September 4th, 2013 9:06am


Thank you! cocowriting.

Wed, September 4th, 2013 6:38am

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