Dont Look Back

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic

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I was in my house alone just watching some family guy, when I decided to go get some ice cream from the local super market.

yes im the one person that goes to the store in there pijamas at 2:00 in the morning for something to eat. so I got in to my broken bmw to go to the store. It started up normal so i went. It was a normal ride for the most part but just around the corner of the store I see a old man on the floor, he was trailing blood behind him. It looked like it hurt so much, but i should have kept my eyes on the road because the next thing i see is my air bag pushing across my face because i hit a stop sign. I dazed for a moment but then i remembered the old man. I quickly jumped out my car, but my foot got stuck and. I had a broken ankle. It wasnt that bat i just had to keep focus on helping the man. i circled around my car then i say him, no it couldnt have been a person it...it.. its face was completly bashed in and then when it saw me. it yelled, it wasnt a normal yell it sound as if it had just gotten his back blown off. As he screamed i noticed his stomach area started to transform. It grew and grew and the more it grew it rottened, then when he stoped yelling he started walking. I was completly frozen, but before he could reach me i ran. I ran as fast as i could to turn that one corner, but when i did there was nothing a oblivian. i had no were to go and now that... THING is charging after me, is this it, is this the end. NO this had to be a dream THIS HAD TO BE A DRE------. 


Submitted: November 28, 2013

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Epicgurl123

Woah! I wonder what happened in the end. ...... creepy. -Xoxox

Thu, November 28th, 2013 9:22pm

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Thank you read my new novel epic, its long but cool please try it its called The Z-day

Thu, November 28th, 2013 1:37pm

Annette Francis

Interesting piece :)

Fri, November 29th, 2013 3:50am

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Thank you have you seen my new novel Sin city can you tell me what you think and what i should improve on and if you can check out the Z-day please it means a lot, and i will do the same it means alot

Thu, November 28th, 2013 7:56pm

Emmy Bhalli

aye, this was pretty good!

Fri, November 29th, 2013 7:55pm

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Thank you would you mind reading my novels then tell me what you think it would mean a lot

Fri, November 29th, 2013 5:16pm

angelique30

This was a very interesting piece, but I wonder what happened in the end was it a dream or was it reality, makes us readers think about that. Great job :)

Mon, December 2nd, 2013 5:09am

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Thank you again!!

Mon, December 2nd, 2013 10:38am

kay123

Great piece. Keep up the good work. Thumbs up. =)

Tue, December 3rd, 2013 4:38am

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Thank you I would like to know if you would like me to keep making these

Tue, December 3rd, 2013 3:24pm

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