Please, I Beg.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

Based on "Hold On Till May" by Pierce The Veil

Please, I beg, don't close the door.

Or leave this subject untouched once more.

It's the same plague that destroys you to the core.

And gets you prepared to go to war.


Please, I beg, don't cry.

Or shout then dry your eyes.

It's the same plague that makes you continue to lie.

About not wanting to say goodbye.


Please, I beg, don't scream.

Someday you'll wake up from this dream,

And your sanity won't be teared at the seams.

Possibly your dignity won't be carried by the stream.


Please, I beg, don't give up.





Submitted: November 20, 2014

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Casper Lasha Freed

Thank you for inviting me to read. I enjoyed this. May I suggest though, 'teared' should be 'torn'. It would also help the flow of the poem.

Fri, November 21st, 2014 4:57pm


Thanks! I think I'll change it ;)

Sat, November 22nd, 2014 4:15pm


This is a very nice piece and a very inspirational one at that. Thank you very much for inviting me to read this :)

Mon, November 24th, 2014 7:46am


thank you! You're welcome :)

Wed, November 26th, 2014 12:30pm


I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem, It is meaningful and deep.

Fri, January 16th, 2015 6:22pm



Thu, February 5th, 2015 11:49am

Adya Dutta

Beautiful piece... Truly inspirational

Tue, April 21st, 2015 11:14pm

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