Please, I beg, don't close the door.
Or leave this subject untouched once more.
It's the same plague that destroys you to the core.
And gets you prepared to go to war.
Please, I beg, don't cry.
Or shout then dry your eyes.
It's the same plague that makes you continue to lie.
About not wanting to say goodbye.
Please, I beg, don't scream.
Someday you'll wake up from this dream,
And your sanity won't be teared at the seams.
Possibly your dignity won't be carried by the stream.
Please, I beg, don't give up.
Submitted: November 20, 2014
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This is a very nice piece and a very inspirational one at that. Thank you very much for inviting me to read this :)
Mon, November 24th, 2014 7:46am
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thank you! You're welcome :)
Wed, November 26th, 2014 12:30pm
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem, It is meaningful and deep.
Fri, January 16th, 2015 6:22pm
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Thanksss!!!!
Thu, February 5th, 2015 11:49am
Beautiful piece... Truly inspirational
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Thank you for inviting me to read. I enjoyed this. May I suggest though, 'teared' should be 'torn'. It would also help the flow of the poem.
Fri, November 21st, 2014 4:57pmAuthor
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Thanks! I think I'll change it ;)
Sat, November 22nd, 2014 4:15pm