My young love story.

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I'm sure many of you young people can relate toy story. Hope you like it.

Submitted: January 02, 2012

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It's been just a little bit over a year ago that I met the best thing that has happened to me in life so far. She's been the first thing on my mind of every morning and the last thing I think of every night for the past few months. I thank God every night for giving me the privilege to live another day and being able to talk to her. I'm sorry, I haven't introduced my self i'm Edward Sparks. I'm just an average sixteen year old. I live in a small town with very great people. Though I plan on moving to the big city when i'm older I still would like to visit this great town. They say a place is only as good as the people in it and that is so true. I know i'm still young and some people would disagree when I say I have fallen in love, but who says you have be old to be in love? Nobody. I met the girl of my dreams at our school basketball game. She has a sister that I was great friends with. I never would have thought that I would of fallen in love with her sister, but I did. Her name is Rose Mary. She has to be one of the most beautiful people that has ever walked on this planet. Not just her appearance is filled with beauty, but her personality is what's most beautiful about her. She can make you smile when she does absolutely nothing. Just the thought of her will make your day infinite times better. Our story started at the basketball game that I mentioned before. A few days after that is when we actually started talking. It only took me a few months to make me realize that I had feelings for her. I dated one of her good friends before I realized all of this so I really didn't think she was that into me, but boy I was wrong. We talked literally almost every second of everyday. It finally got to the point where I just couldn't be friends with her. I wanted to be something more so I asked her if she wanted to be in a relationship with me on March 26, 2010. I remember it like it was yesterday. I was walking her to her bus as I would do on any normal day at the end of school. A few days before actually asking her if she wanted to date me I talked to one of her best friends about everything and if it was a good idea or not and she said it was. It took a lot of courage on my part to ask her because I wasn't sure if she felt the same way. Back were we left off. As I was walking her to her bus I realized we were getting close to her bus so I asked her, \"Do you want to be in a relationship with me?\" She looks at me for a split second and says \"I'll get back to you on that.\" My heart just drops. I wasn't sure what to think. Is our friendship over? Is it going to be awkward from now on? I just had no clue. I just waited patiently till the next day. I didn't see her that whole day during school so I thought she was just hiding from me, but at the end of the day she was waiting for me where she usually did. I was surprised, but I didn't let it show. We walked again. Remember this was the day after. Okay, so we walked and I was still curious if she was hiding from me so I ask her and she says \"No, I thought you were..\" I just let that go because she still had not answered my question of the day.before. The walk to her bus was pretty awkward because neither of us brought the conversation about us being together up. After being just a few seconds away from her bus I ask her, \"Have you thought about it?\" She says, \"Yes.\" Then I ask her, \" Well, do you want to?\" She says, \"Umm, yes.\" I wasn't sure if she really did want to, but I thought to myself that time would tell. All of this happened towards the end of our middle school year. Almost everyday I was tardy for my classes just for walking her to her classroom, but it was all worth it. My happiness with her didn't last long after school was over. I thought our relationship was strong enough to withstand anything and everything thrown at us, but I was wrong. I was moving on to high school and a new school. She was going on her third year of middle school. I personally did not think that that would be a problem at all. I thought it'd be good just to see eachother once a week just to give us time to miss eachother. I wasn't happy about it, but sometimes you have to see the good in something bad. On the other hand Rose Mary had other ideas. She didn't think we would make it. After just one month she tells me it's over. When she tells me this my mind goes blank. I just couldn't believe that she ended it like that with no explanation. The thing that really hurt me the most is that it was so unexpected. Our love was at it's climax and just to end something like that made absolute no sense to me. After a few minutes I ask her why she did what she did. She gave me multiple reasons. She mostly brought up the fact that i'm moving to another school, but again it just didn't add up because we had already talked about everything before. I had a feeling that she was lying to me, but I didn't say anything. We completely stopped talking after that. I guess she felt guilty for lying to me so she decides to tell me the truth. She tells me that her mom didn't want her to date me anymore because she would stay up at late hours just talking to me. That was pretty hard to believe on my part because I just can't imagine my parents telling me who I can and can't be with, but that was the most reasonable reason that came out of her mouth so I believed her. I met her mom over the summer at Rose Marys cheerleading show. She seemed like a great women. I just couldn't imagine her telling her daughter that. After a month or so we decide to leave that in the past and move on. We still kept in touch here and there. We both still had feelings for eachother and day by day they kept getting stronger, but by this time I was already talking to someone else her name is Anna Marie. I'm going to be completely honest. It didn't exactly feel right moving on to her right after falling out of love just a few weeks before, but she was going through a breakup also so I completely understood how hurt she was and she understood hurt I was. We just happened to be in eachothers lives at the most precise moment. I knew it wasn't right talking to two girls at once so I had to make a decision. Rose Marys mom finally understood by this time that my love for her daughter was real and she let her do what she desired. She wanted nothing more than to be with me once more and I wanted nothing more than to be with her once more, but it's impossible to love two wonderful people at once and it isn't right. I do believe in second chances if you deserve them trust me Rose Mary deserved one more than anyone. As much as I wanted to be able to call her mine one more time I just couldn't imagine her leaving me here again. I couldn't decided whether to go back and make everything perfect again with Rose Mary or start a new beginning with Anna Marie. My heart was telling me to be with Rose Mary, but my mind kept telling me to be with Anna Marie by the time I had made my mind up it was too late. Rose Marys friend told her that I was talking to someone else. She asked me if it was true. I said yes. She didn't talk to me after that. We both went our separate ways after that. I ended up being in a three month relationship with Anna Marie. It didn't really workout between us. They say either you loved someone and still do or you never did. I don't have any feelings for her anymore so I guess I never loved her. After all of this Rose Mary and I begin to talk, but just as friends nothing more or less. She forgave me for what I did to her, but she tells me that she may never trust me again. I completely understood. I think I have gained her trust by now. It's been a year and a few months. I know that isn't long enough to know if you are in love with somebody, but what I do know is that everytime we do talk I just keep falling for her even harder. I will always have a piece of her in my heart.


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