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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Just a little poem about a can of Coca-Cola. I'd be interested to hear what you think of it.

Shiny, red metal.
A flame in the light
that gives a glare of hope.
A dream.
A candle.

Melting, hot wax.
A flicker of light
that stutters in the wind.

Crumbled, crushed can.
Failing in the light
that deserts us to dark.
A dead dream.
A failure.

Submitted: April 08, 2012

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Serenity In Silence

Wow. You make a can of Coke seem much more different than a can of Coke.

Mon, April 9th, 2012 1:49am

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