help... me...

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

just a short poem

 

Can someone do me a favor? It’s nothing to big, just grab a cup, to catch my tears, I heard if I drink them, they will drown all my fears. I also heard if you have someone there who stands behind you through thick and thin, I’ll get my spine again, and maybe walk on my own for the first in what seem like forever. Another thing that I heard that could help is to grab my hand, it well help, to pull me out of the black fires and into the golden light, and wrapping your around me would help stay out of the darkness. I think that’s all except one thing… but you don’t have to do it, it’s pretty broken anyways. But the choice is up to you…


Submitted: December 30, 2011

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Drinking your tears is wallowing in your troubles. Let your true friend not stand behind but beside you and extend a hand when you have fallen.

We all stumble and fall. Were it not for the valleys of life the peaks of life would be monotonous. Stand up and dust yourself off, signifying a refusal to wallow in troubles.

You have always had a spine and your friend is there to remind you that you are a champion. You were a winner once and your trophies and certificates are there to remind you of the winner, lying dormant within you, anxious to arise again.

We all face battles and from time to time fall. Losers wallow in the mud. Winners rise and resume the fight. Your friends comfort you until you work through the flu, heal a broken heart, or finally defeat depression. Then, like a good parent (human or bird), they let you go out on your own again.

Fri, December 30th, 2011 10:27pm

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Hmmm okay never thought of it that way

Fri, December 30th, 2011 5:50pm

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