this is what she's gunna be

Miscellaneous by: justme626

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hey this is NOT true it just something that popped in my head

Hey dad? why not? why do you answer no?

its only a pricing, it will go away

so don't flip out, i'm fourteen i live my life for me

Mom, dont scream its only a tattoo

i'm fifteen i have my own dreams

so don't trytoo change me

HEY world! look at me i am finally sixteen! i am who i want to be

my parent's say no, the world hates to know

but i am me, it might not be in my gene's

but i am amazing don't try and hurt me

Hey mom, dad. Please don't hate me...

i'm sorry but the condom broke

i'm eight weeks....

i still sont know what its going to be

this is what she's gunna be... i'll be looking at me

Submitted: November 20, 2011

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Julya,
For your readers to believe your writing must be true is a real compliment to your writing abilities.

Again, spelling. Pricing should have been piercing.

"Don't try and change me". Although conversational, it is correct as "Don't try to change me". Do you see how "and" makes no sense in this context?

Overall, you language skills have improved. Your storytelling is outstanding!
Georgie

Sat, November 26th, 2011 2:15pm

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yeah i'm sorry my English isn't so good, i'm kind of from the trailor park... thing. so you can call me a redneck, my spelling is bad too... yeah... that was your random peice of useles info you will learn about me tee-hee

Sat, November 26th, 2011 6:53am