That I Love About You

Reads: 189  | Likes: 0  | Shelves: 0  | Comments: 1

More Details
Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic
Part of a song which I had writer block on so I changed it into a poem. The whole point of the poem is for it to feel unfinished because the list is unfinished. Tell me what you guy's think ;) x

Submitted: October 06, 2011

A A A | A A A

Submitted: October 06, 2011



We were in college and you looked like a rock star

Always telling me that you were gunna go far

I just smiled and laughed along with you

Knowing you would be gone ‘fore I could tell you


That I have a long list of things that a love about you,

Number one is your attitude, you’re never in a mood,

You’re always smiling, even though you’re hiding,

What you truly feel inside,


Number two is the way your hair shines, in the moonlight,

I could watch you all night

Laughing and joking, about the stupid little things

That don’t mean a thing, to me or you oh oh,


My list doesn’t stop there; it goes on to number 45,

But I just don’t have the time

To list all of the things that I want to tell you,

That I love about you.

© Copyright 2017 K L Copley. All rights reserved.

Add Your Comments: