What can i say, 11 months with someone, i guess i have lots of feelings:/


Like A Dove.

In the beginning it was about our love.
It was simple, but beautiful like a dove.

The days became shorter.
Our time was ticking.
You weren't even a supporter.

Our love was torn and ripped in every direction.
Slowly but sadly there was loss of connection.
The doves no longer flew,
because now separate, was me and you.

Submitted: December 30, 2007

© Copyright 2023 KacyisdaSHIT. All rights reserved.

Add Your Comments:



Wow, you ARE a great writer. Bloody brilliant form and rhythm, flows well, captivating, full of pasion and feeling. Very well done.

Sun, December 30th, 2007 9:01am


Thank you soo soo much. This means soo much to me. It feels that writing is the only way i can get my feelings out:]


Sun, December 30th, 2007 1:05am


i don't know how you do it. you rhythm and it sounds great. the word play at the end was fabulous. keep writing kc.
peace out._____Lyd____

Mon, December 31st, 2007 11:24pm



Mon, December 31st, 2007 6:43pm

Facebook Comments

Other Content by KacyisdaSHIT

Poem / Romance

Poem / Romance