Like A Dove.
In the beginning it was about our love.
It was simple, but beautiful like a dove.
The days became shorter.
Our time was ticking.
You weren't even a supporter.
Our love was torn and ripped in every direction.
Slowly but sadly there was loss of connection.
The doves no longer flew,
because now separate, was me and you.
Submitted: December 30, 2007
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i don't know how you do it. you rhythm and it sounds great. the word play at the end was fabulous. keep writing kc.
peace out._____Lyd____
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Thanks!
Mon, December 31st, 2007 6:43pmFacebook Comments
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Wow, you ARE a great writer. Bloody brilliant form and rhythm, flows well, captivating, full of pasion and feeling. Very well done.
Sun, December 30th, 2007 9:01amAuthor
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Thank you soo soo much. This means soo much to me. It feels that writing is the only way i can get my feelings out:]
Sun, December 30th, 2007 1:05amthanks!
---Kcy:]