On The Outide.
For what you see on the outside isnt true.
I am torn and broken from the pain you put me through.
On the outside you see a happy and joyful smile.
But on the inside there are tears that could flood for miles and miles.
If only you knew what you turned me into.
Someone with a broken heart...
Someone who has to find how to restart.
She walks the halls alone, she talks in a positive tone.
She cries only everynight, wishing you would hold her tight. But all she can do is fight, and fight.
Lost in her emotions, she thinks of crying oceans.
But you cant even tell, what she went through was hell.
Submitted: December 30, 2007
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Again, I love the structure and rhyme. Very well done. Captivating and powerfully expressive, lives a print in the readers mind. Thanks for sharing.
Sun, December 30th, 2007 9:00am
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Thanks. :]
---Kcy.
i can't say very much. it left me speachless. it is like one of my favs by you. again you hava good voice. and you have that certain word play on your side too.
write more.
peace out.____Lyd_____
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Thank you very much!
--Kcy:]
um. i love you. (: this piece just made you my favorite person on this whole site. youre amazing
Mon, January 14th, 2008 7:30pm
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haha, well i love you too:]! lol. thanks.
--Kcy:]
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KacyisdaSHIT:
Sun, December 30th, 2007 7:28amWell written and expressed. Gave it an "I Like It" vote.
More will want to read it if you repost it using a larger print font. Booksie provides this feature.
Have a Happy 2008!
Happy trails,
Ed Bradley.
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Thanks, you too:]
Sat, December 29th, 2007 11:30pm