My friend wrote this and showed it to me, i wanted to see what you guys thought. I liked it.


What They Look Like.

From the outside,
You see a dork,
But on the inside,
I'm a very nice person,
And cares about everyone,
On the outside,
You see a jock,
But in the inside,
I am just like you,
When were together,
We look like a messed up couple,
But in the inside,
We were made for each other.

Submitted: January 02, 2008

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James Gagiikwe

Outsside is all persona, teenager looking for a personality to wear. Inside is the reality, the person they willbecome if they reachout to others and shre themselves.

Wed, January 2nd, 2008 4:20am




Tue, January 1st, 2008 8:29pm


i actually sorta like it.
peace out.____xxemoxbfsxx____

Wed, January 2nd, 2008 4:35am


I like it too!


Tue, January 1st, 2008 8:37pm


What do we wear on the outside? A label, a nametag, armour? What do they see when they look upon you? Do these define us, do they define us, must they define us? Do you fight this persona, do you hide behind it, within it? Is it a shield, a burdan, a convineince? What it is, is what we make it. Or whatever. Nice write.

Wed, January 2nd, 2008 8:18am




Wed, January 2nd, 2008 4:21pm


i like i like! This reminds me of me and my Ex, he was so goth and i was sooo Preppy and then he just totally changed me. Now well, i guess i never went back to preppy and now hollister sickens me XD.

Sat, January 19th, 2008 2:07am


haha, yeah theres lots of poems about my ex on here. It sickens Thanks for the comment.


Fri, January 18th, 2008 6:09pm

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