Your Thunder.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is just something i came up with...

Thunder

As i lay alone at night i sit and wonder.
What Could it have been?
The sky then begins to thunder.
I only think of you now and then.

My tears pour down like the rain.
If only he knew.
Loosing him was too hard to main-tain.

The sky still is going through a rumble.
Did he love me?
My heart then was only left to crumble.

As i lay there left in dispair.
My heart was the only thing left to repair.



Submitted: December 30, 2007

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EdwardJBradleySr

KacyisdaSHIT:

You need to repost this for 2 reasons:

1. To give the text a larger print font.

2. To allow readers to give it an "I Like It" vote. Can't be done now. Sometimes happens for shorter postings. Use of the larger print font should fix this.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Sun, December 30th, 2007 7:31am

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Thanks?

Sun, December 30th, 2007 12:22am

Curious Callie

I can relate - you did an amazing job of putting into words what millions of girls feel.

Can't wait to read more of your stuff :)
-Callie

Sun, December 30th, 2007 8:25am

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Thank you very very much. Im one of those girls:]


--Kcy:]

Sun, December 30th, 2007 12:27am

Itsuwari

God I love poems without a repetitive rhyme scheme, I mean rhyming helps but the ababcdcdefef gets redundant and old. Which is one of the reasons I love your poetry so much. Thanks for sharing.

Sun, December 30th, 2007 10:41am

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Thank you, i looovee to rhyme!

---Kcy:]

Sun, December 30th, 2007 2:43am

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