Unleashed :: by Kaij

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic
So many paths to choose from. So many choices to make. And only one key to unleash what's inside.

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Chapter One

Submitted: March 16, 2008

So many paths to choose from. So many choices to make. And only one key to unleash what's inside.

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What I'm looking for is some good feedback. Shred the chapter if you want, but you better back up your reasoning. If not, I'll just laugh. I don't mind praise, but please, nothing is perfect in this world. Point out the mistakes you see or things you're not quite understanding. I want this novel published, so it still needs tweaking here and there. Read Chapter