A Vampire's Reality

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is one of my less dark poems

I am invisible to mortal eyes,

Drifting around them like ghost,

I listen in anguish to their desperate cries,

The sound is the thing I hate the most,

For them I do not exist,

I am the mystery of all time,

Tearing through the fog and mist,

At midnight on the twelth chime,

I bceome my victim's reality,

His last word is barely heard,

I slay worshippers of vanity,

The thing that's caused the vision of purity to be blurred,

My victim calls me a monster, and he is right,

I start to fade again,

Trying to hold on with all my might,

I know I shall return, but when?

Submitted: March 08, 2012

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sweet agony xo

it doesnt make sense witch is the bit i like. excellent writing! :)

Fri, March 9th, 2012 2:48am


lol thanks
i like to make things that people reallyt have to think about to understand ^^

Fri, March 9th, 2012 3:49am


It's very lovely, well written. I love the air of mystery in it!

Fri, March 9th, 2012 4:45pm


Thankyou, if you like this, I can always put some of my others up :)

Sun, March 11th, 2012 7:32am

I am Revera Love

Very nice :) Hey if your into vampires I'm trying my hand at thelm myself and could use some expirenced feedback. If your interested please check out I'm not crazy or Kinsey Risner is dead. Thank you and great job again :)

Wed, March 14th, 2012 1:50am


Sure thing ^^

Thu, March 15th, 2012 3:45pm

Miss Trevize

The vampire is a paradox, like humans, as a character. Cruel but kind, weak but strong.

Nice poem!

Sun, April 8th, 2012 1:39am


thankyou for your feedback :)

Sun, April 8th, 2012 10:08am

meenakshi sharma

that was beutiful my freind.. :)

Tue, May 29th, 2012 5:09am


thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

Tue, May 29th, 2012 8:56am


Looks like you have been there for more than one time....or that might be a depiction of a nightmare. Perhaps its something worth while reading it more than once...

Tue, June 21st, 2016 8:46pm

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