This war is mine

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

I made this up when I was fed up of being critised by people just because I'm different.

I lay upon this bed of thorns,

My blood has stained the white roses red,

You stand beside me and scorn,

But I won't surrender until I'm dead,

I will fight and scream until the end,

You cannot silence my will,

As I wish, hope and dream, the silent prayers I send,

I know my message will conquer all,

The trials and tribulations I went through will not be in vain,

For as we all know,

You canot avoid the stain,

Of a tainted soul and fading light,

I am far from losing this fight.


Submitted: April 09, 2012

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tictacs

Powerful poem.
I'm really glad you shared this. As I read on I became more and more attached to your words. This is an really good piece :)

Tics

Mon, April 16th, 2012 4:38pm

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thanks! :D

Mon, April 16th, 2012 10:34am

Antoine Watson I

for someone who is so young you write with so much experience. i agree that this poem in its entirety was very powerful. But the 1st two lines demanded attention. You a very talented.

Thu, June 7th, 2012 12:34am

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I'll get right on the first couple lines, thanks for the feedback! :)

Thu, June 7th, 2012 6:51am

Phoenix Elvis Nicholson

Very well done I could picture the valiance and spirit

Fri, October 19th, 2012 12:27pm

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Thankyou for your feedback

Mon, October 22nd, 2012 4:13am

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