Whisper your Secrets
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Poem by: kannette
O, the golden horizon
Flowers dunk in it,
Bright and beautiful
Time for me to visit,
To give you my last kiss
O, sister I hear you
Whisper your secrets,
As you bid me adieu
The golden horizon fades,
Time for me to visit,
To give you my last touch
Run along my sister
Stories yet to share,
Whisper your secrets
As you bid me adieu
Promise, you will hear me
A new form I take tomorrow
O, sister! The golden horizon fades
Time for me to visit,
The damp ground on which I lay
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Comments
Great poem, beautiful images! It was quite ambiguous, which I enjoyed, but in the description box you have quite a specific story... Just wondering if you could make that story a little clearer in the poem? Doesn't really matter though, it's still great as it is ;)
Author
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Yes true there, i will try to modify it; to make it more clear. Thank you :)
I'm really glad you told me about your poem. It was beautiful, and I loved it?.
Author
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Thank you :)
A very interesting and unique poem. I liked the description box because it gives you insight into what the poem is going to be. Overall, I really enjoyed your poem.
Author
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Thank you :)
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