Whisper your Secrets

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic

A life of a butterfly, who shares its secrets with the flowing river.When its almost sunset, the butterfly flies and kisses the flowers a last kiss. Promises, river (sister) full of secrets travels
constantly to whisper her secrets and wait for the butterfly to be reborn in new form so that they share their secrets and keep the bond strong

O, the golden horizon

Flowers dunk in it,

Bright and beautiful

Time for me to visit,

To give you my last kiss


O, sister I hear you

Whisper your secrets,

As you bid me adieu

The golden horizon fades,

Time for me to visit,

To give you my last touch


Run along my sister

Stories yet to share,

Whisper your secrets

As you bid me adieu


Promise, you will hear me

A new form I take tomorrow

O, sister! The golden horizon fades

Time for me to visit,

The damp ground on which I lay

Submitted: April 10, 2016

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Amy R. Beckett

Great poem, beautiful images! It was quite ambiguous, which I enjoyed, but in the description box you have quite a specific story... Just wondering if you could make that story a little clearer in the poem? Doesn't really matter though, it's still great as it is ;)

Mon, April 11th, 2016 5:19am


Yes true there, i will try to modify it; to make it more clear. Thank you :)

Mon, April 11th, 2016 10:31am


I'm really glad you told me about your poem. It was beautiful, and I loved it?.

Mon, April 11th, 2016 6:40am


Thank you :)

Mon, April 11th, 2016 10:30am


A very interesting and unique poem. I liked the description box because it gives you insight into what the poem is going to be. Overall, I really enjoyed your poem.

Tue, April 12th, 2016 3:21am


Thank you :)

Tue, April 12th, 2016 9:53am

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