Farewell Kiss

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

It about a girl whos in love with a guy and he treats her really bad, so this is her letter to him.

 So I was wondering

Am I brave fo leaving

Or am I just scared love

Scared of being loved

So I was crying

Thinking

Trying to figure

why Im ready to pull that trigger

And I realized Im not

Not ready for life to end

For life to end all around me

Life is ending all around me

So why should I care

About how you dare

To hurt me how you swear

You love me oh, no

Im very much prepared

For all the sadness and despair

I understand now why I've fallen so hard

Fallen so hard for you

In this poem I've written for you

I want to say Im smitten over you

But this farewell kiss is well over due


Submitted: July 24, 2011

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erica19

goodjob:)

Sun, August 14th, 2011 5:38am

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thx(;

Sun, August 14th, 2011 9:31am

Mary Jo

I love your flow and hope you keep up ur style, i absolutly love it, read 2 things and now i want to be a fan, hope you'll exept me!!!!!! kmu

Sun, August 14th, 2011 8:52pm

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Thank you(;

Sun, August 14th, 2011 2:25pm

Amandagriggs

Amazing writing style! I love your poetry you have a really incredible voice. beautiful :)

Mon, August 15th, 2011 7:35am

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thank you soo much(:

Mon, August 15th, 2011 6:14am

absolutelyalice

Wow! That's a beautiful poem :) Love the way it rhymes, and yeah ... don't have anything else to say to be honest.

Keep up the FABULOUS work! You rock!

Fri, September 16th, 2011 3:45pm

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oh wow thank you(;

Fri, September 16th, 2011 9:18am

gabber20

Great Job love it! I can feel how the feel you put into this poem! Great!

Thu, October 6th, 2011 5:16pm

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Thank you(:

Sat, October 8th, 2011 12:52pm

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